Walt: describe a setting in a story
Greenery as far as my eyes can see. All of a sudden, I stumble across a tiny house nestled in the base of a gigantic oak tree. It looks creepy and seems lifeless like an abandoned home. A dim light shines upon the path that leads to a door frame, wrapped in ivy. Although my heart is racing, I wonder who is inside. Darkness surrounds the tree house with olive green colours laying on the forest floor. I stare in amazement at the tree roots that wrap their arms around each down the side of the trunk and glide outwards towards a swamp. A selection of flat river stones are placed higgeldy piggeldy up to the front door from a rickety old bridge. I feel so curious. Who lives there? My curiosity beats me, so I slowly creep over the squeaking bridge and tip toe carefully on each river stone to the front door. Lifting my hand, I take a deep breath and …..Knock!
Success criteria
- Similes
- Metaphor
- Personification
- Simple, compound and complex sentences
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