Task:
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To write a story describing my favourite character using well-structured
sentences
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WALT:
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To use well-structured sentences in our writing
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Success
criteria (I will know when I have done it when)
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… I use adjectives to describe nouns
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I use verbs to describe what the noun is
doing
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I use adverbs to describe the verbs
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I use a prepositional phrase to say where
this is all happening
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Exemplar:
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Mr
Twit
When I look at Mr Twit, he makes my tummy feel squirmy. His hairy face, sprouts tuffs out of his nostrils
and ear holes. As you know, most ordinary faces generally grow smooth hair, however with Mr Twit, grew spikes that stick straight
out like bristles on a tooth brush.
When he eats, the food clings to the hairs and stay there
FOREVER! Yuck!
If you look close and peer deep into
his forest of bristles, you will know
doubt see a piece of mouldy
cheese or old cornflake.
He’s a horrid old
man. He plays mean tricks on his wife at home and likes to catch birds for a bird pie ewwww!
Look out when you see Mr Twit.
You have been warned.
Remember to’s: I have used…
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Capital letters
Full stops correctly
Commas
A variety of sentences
(starters hook)
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Appropriate adjectives
Appropriate verbs and
adverbs
Variety of interesting
nouns
Show don’t tell
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Personification
Alliteration
Similies and metaphors
Onomatopoeia
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