L.I- To describe of your favourite place.
Balmedie Beach - a time lapse video from David Watson on Vimeo.
Mr Clark's exemplar
Sand crumbles like dust beneath my feet as the sun pounds relentlessly
on my back. The baby blue sky is filled
with marshmallow clouds that float aimlessly towards who knows where. For as far as the eyes can see it is only
white and blue. Only the odd sparkle of a sea shell that pierces my eyes with
their glittery brilliance disrupts this. The sand hugs the coastline majestically as
the sea gently creeps closer and closer to the dunes behind me.
To my right I can see trees swaying on the hill, almost in
time to the music of the birdsong. The sea breeze whizzes gently over me, stroking
my face and playing gently with my hair. I can smell the sea, I can taste the
salty air on my tongue. I feel alive.
The waves crumple into the shore like white horses steaming through the
ocean and I am at peace listening to them crashing clumsily. This is my heaven. This is where I belong.
Today you are going to describe your favourite place. Think of the things that you liked from Mr Clark's exemplar and use this in your own writing. In writing you can 'BORROW' ideas, words and phrases to help with your own writing.
Success Criteria
Today you are going to describe your favourite place. Think of the things that you liked from Mr Clark's exemplar and use this in your own writing. In writing you can 'BORROW' ideas, words and phrases to help with your own writing.
Success Criteria
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