Walt: describe the senior swimming sports day
Remember
the:
Roar
of Mr Taylors voice, to quieten us for the subsequent event
Giggles
of excitement leading up to an event
Chitter
chatter of the children on the banks of the pool,
“Go!”
boomed by Mr taylor's voice that echoed in my ears
Screams
of the crowd as loud as a banchee, cheering on the swimmers
Crystal
clear water brushing our physiques as we glided to the finish
Hands
slapping the aquatic as they plunged below the deep blue
Splashes
of clear aqua cascading down the sides of the pool
Cool
drips sliding down our bodies as we departed the pool
Puddles
laying quietly on the ground awaiting the pitter patter of feet
Dusky
blue sky peering down upon us and the Soft nibbles of the sun, warming our
skin. The Cool breeze that brushed over
our bodies, drying us like a towel.
Quiet
lays upon us as the children depart to their homes.
Stillness, calm, emptiness!
Success Criteria (My writing to be successful should include these language features
Adjectives, crystal clear water
Alliteration (repeating sounds/letters) chitter chatter, pitter patter
Similes (compare using like or as) loud as a banchee
Metaphors (compare without using like or as) crystal water
Personification (adding a human characteristic to a non-human object) breeze brushed over our bodies
Short sentences for impact
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